CHEVALIER, AMBROSIA

[AMBROSIA CHEVALIER]

AMBROSIA CHEVALIER

Do you believe in Magic

• • HOPE YOU GOT YOUR THINGS TOGETHER,
hope you are quite prepared to die

FULL NAME: Ambrosia Aqua Chevalier
NICKNAME: Ambro, Ambi, Brosia
AGE: 24
BIRTHDATE: January 11th 1986
SPECIES: demigoddess
GENDER: female
ORIENTATION: Straight
OCCUPATION: Musician performer

• • LOOKS LIKE WE'RE IN FOR NASTY WEATHER,
one eye is taken for an eye

FACE CLAIM: Alyssa Miller
SKIN: Olive color
HAIR: Dark brown, sometimes black
EYES: beautiful blue or hazel
HEIGHT: 5ft 7inches
WEIGHT: 150
OVERALL APPEARANCE: She is a gorgeous girl that comes at a height of 5ft 7 inches she has a nice hourglass figure and she is usually mistaken for a model. She likes to wear nice leather jackets with cute dresses or shirts with cute jeans. You can always see her have her hair curly. She has striking hazel eyes that normally look blue that seems to catch anyone’s eye. Known for this appearance, people tend to say hello and talk to her for no reason, pose wise she usually has her hands near her lap or in her pockets, she is also known to wear a heart shaped necklace with a musical note around it.

• • DON'T GO AROUND TONIGHT,
well, it's bound to take your life

LIKES:

DISLIKES:

STRENGTHS:

WEAKNESSES:

FEARS:

POWERS & ABILITIES: Muse: Ancient Greek goddess that was involved with Music. She is capable of seeing waves of music, using it as a weapon and a form of psychic connection with human beings or people.

OVERALL PERSONALITY: Borsia is a optimist, she likes the bright side of everything she doesn’t like to be in between of anything not even two men fighting over her which is not her fault cause of her mother. She loves to sing and the sound of music, and pleasing others.

She is very curious and witty, she loves to learn and go on many adventures but she is very closed up because of what happened to her father, she isn’t big on sharing feeling usually people come to her and share their feelings. She is known for her great beauty so she attracts a lot of men, she doesn’t like flirting actually she is very shy and she would try to avoid them as much as possible but she end up being a huge klutz about it and cry.

All in all she loves having fun, and playing games so if you have a game you would like to play or party with this girl then go right ahead but make she it’s isn’t death threat or kinky please…

• • THERE'S A BAD MOON ON THE RISE,
don't go around tonight

HISTORY: Ambrosia was born and raise in the city of Venice with her father, Rozas who would be the greatest composer, not for mozart and the others, Ambrosia thought he was better. But her life was never perfect they had to move around a lot because well she was born a Demi goddess well the right term Muse, because of her mother Thalia. To start some trouble Eris the Goddess of Chaos decided to place a horrible curse upon the child.

The curse was if she played a happy song it would kill anyone near her hint why she plays sad music despite her cheerful personality eventually the curse got out of hand and killed her best friend. Athena shocked and outraged both Her and Thalia pleaded with the gods to remove the curse, out of Zeus stormy heart he lowered the curse so others wouldn’t go nuts. To stop the fighting and chaos, Thalia gave her sweet daughter a necklace to protect her and keep the curse from getting out of hand.

Moving to American would be better she hoped, because of her godly like powers she aged a lot faster now at the age of 18 she was going to college and learning how to be a musician for her father’s sake and her mother’s who loved music also. Noticing that she could see sound waves and attract many around her she got a deal with a record company and became a professional musician but more problems stirred up with her curse and she had to quit and go on her own with the music business.

Moving to Detroit she started her life working at a nice club and singing and performing in front of many catching the hearts of many, she got paid good money even enough to get a nice apartment but she soon had to moved due to killing someone on accident.

Hoping that would help, Finally settling down in a hotel she found her herself trying to make a plan, to find a way to be human and not this thing she was, maybe if she made a deal with a demon or some how got rid of this death threatening curse it would go away but for now if she wore the special necklace her mother gave her would keep the curse away unless removed. Maybe she could be use for some purposes.

• • WELL, IT'S BOUND TO TAKE YOUR LIFE,
there's a bad moon on the rise

ALIAS: Re
OTHER ACCOUNTS: Constance
EXPERIENCE: 2+
WHERE DID YOU FIND US: On a site
ROLEPLAY SAMPLE: Look at Constance >,<

[VAN*LLA]

The staff and I have discussed your application and have decided there are a several adjustments that need to be made:

Birthdate:

Everyone has a day of birth. Perhaps she may not recall said date; however, a hospital would have her birthday on record. This is also a blatant inconsistency, since you stated she attends bars. In order to even drink an alcoholic beverage you would need an I.D; an I.D would state her birthdate.

Species:

A prophet is not a species. Human, angel, demon, vampire, werewolf, etc, are species. A person can be a prophet.

Occupation:

“Homeless Stigmatic Girl” is not an occupation. “Prophet” would be a more of an apt response. Examples of jobs would be: student, barmaid, and hunter.

Appearance:

You state she is both 5’ 8” and 5’ 5”, which is a contradiction. I suggest you view a [url=http://www.healthchecksystems.com/heightweightchart.htm

[/url]height and weight chart[/url] to create a character with believable proportions.

As for her overall appearance: there is nothing “cute” or “beautiful” about a woman who is nearly starved and homeless. Very young children weigh eighty-one lbs. A twenty-three year old female would most likely be bedridden and unable to take proper care of herself if she weighed barely over eighty. She would be void of womanly curves and full breasts, being mere skin and bones, which is not appealing in the slightest.

You say she’s homeless, so that would definitely not help her in the long run. She wouldn’t have access to a bathroom or the proper items in order to have good hygiene. Her hair would be a mess, skin covered in dirt and debris, clothes sullied and threadbare. Not to mention she’d probably have horrible body odor and bad breath.

Powers and Abilities:

We would like you to remove the stigmata aspect from your application. It does not sit well with a staff member and we wish to respect her religious views. Anyway, the stigmata occurs in the hands, feet, and forehead; not the ribs. Also, please do not compare your character to Jesus in any aspect—again it does not rest well with members.

Overall Personality:

If she were in a coma for twenty years, she would have the mindset of a child. She would not have had the time to socialize or be properly educated. She would have been conscious for three years—being three years old the last time she was awake.

Don’t assume everyone will love your character. Lucifer and the majority of demons would probably not feel a single shred of sympathy for her.

History:

Again, don’t assume Lucifer or any canon character is looking for her. It’s best to leave canon characters out of original character applications. Most of the time an original character will not meet many of the canon characters nor will he or she bond with a canon character the way you may want him or her to.[/blockquote][/blockquote][/size]

[AMBROSIA CHEVALIER]

Okay figured. @_@

This is why I have back up plans!

[VAN*LLA]

Again, the staff and I have discussed your application and have decided there are a several adjustments that need to be made:

Species:

Ambrosia would not be a half-muse, she would be a demigod. The Muses were the daughters of Zeus and Mnemosyne and were not related to Aphrodite or Venus in any way, shape, or form.

Appearance:

If she were fair, she would not be considered tan; one or the other.

Please, edit out the phrase “screw you”, it did not rest well with one of the staff members.

Moreover, can you elaborate on the whole “snake eye” scenario? Why would she have snake-like eyes? Most people would find snake-like eyes to be unattractive and frightening.

Powers and Abilities:

I don’t understand how she has abilities that pertain to music when her mother is the goddess of love and beauty. Perhaps her mom should be a Muse instead.

Overall Personality:

There are people who aren’t up-to-date with technology, though we live in a technologically advanced world, so she wouldn’t be able to disregard it completely.

History:

Her father can be a great composer, but not the greatest composer ever; how could he outdo Mozart and Beethoven?

Aphrodite is the goddess of love and she had many human consorts. Demigods weren’t rare nor were they punished for being born.

Again, a staff member does not take kindly to the implied incest and rape; please, remove it from your application.

Why would demons be interested her? She has a power, however most demons would probably be considered stronger than her.

And where did she get the necklace?

Please, elaborate.

I apologize if we sound cruel, however we simply wish to help you and we would love for you to fix your application, so you can join our family.

[AMBROSIA CHEVALIER]

FIXED!!!

[VAN*LLA]

Sorry, it has taken me a while to respond. I had to discuss the changes to your application with the staff:

Species:

Please, change species to demigod. Muse was a title given to a select few goddesses; not a species.

Powers and Abilities:

Her powers are believable; all save for the ability to see into the future. Ambrosia’s mother is a Muse, the Muses’ powers revolved around the arts (music, art, poetry, etc), not precognition.

Physical Charm:

Why does she have an irresistible charm? Thalia—again—is a Muse and minor goddess; she was not known for her beauty.

History:

Again, I don’t understand why the gods would punish her. Thalia is a minor goddess and the Greek gods had affairs with many mortal men and woman, which went without punishment; in fact Zeus was known for his many relationships and demigods were very common.

I am going to try and help you. What if Ambrosia was able to alter the moods of people with her music; if she sang a happy song, it made people happy; if she sang a sad song, it made people sad, etc. Perhaps, there was an incident and she was given the necklace in order to suppress her powers.

Or, like a staff member mentioned, she could eventually make a deal with a demon to get rid of her abilities, which could be an interesting sub-plot.

I don’t understand why Hades would go out of his way to capture Ambrosia for his son. Hades has many children, why would he pay such attention to one?

[AMBROSIA CHEVALIER]

Try this again, I am usually good with Characters but things have been kind of complicated, but try it now if not I will fix or switch characters.

[VAN*LLA]

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